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41 :" 85 :5 :.GGG Poor usage: I believe that optimizing compilers can reorder data accesses to improve locality. Better usage: Optimizing compilers can reorder data accesses to improve locality. Unless there is a citation at the end of the sentence, or you explicitly stated otherwise, everything that you write is your opinion, your belief, and your thought. 9

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52 "!" Poor usage: Feldmeier~\cite{feldmeierINFOCOM88} demonstrates that a routing-table cache may reduce the lookup time in network gateways by 65\%. Better usage: Feldmeier demonstrates that a routing-table cache may reduce the lookup time in network gateways by 65\%~\cite{feldmeierINFOCOM88}. D#

53 G Poor usage: Chiueh et al. designs a CPU-style IP caching scheme and demonstrates that general-purpose processors can serve as a powerful platform for highperformance IP routing~\cite{chiueh1999}. Better usage: Chiueh et al. design a CPU-style IP caching scheme and demonstrates that general-purpose processors can serve as a powerful platform for highperformance IP routing~\cite{chiueh1999}. D

54 *R!R R Poor usage: This framework doesn t address dynamic compilation. Better usage: This framework does not address dynamic compilation. Avoid contractions in technical writing. D9

55 !' Poor usage: This framework does not address dynamic compilation. Better usage: This framework applies to static compilation. Make your sentences affirmative. DD

56 ( Poor usage: Cache memories are built with expensive technology, so they are small. Better usage: Cache memories are built with expensive technology, therefore they are small. Avoid all colloquialisms in technical writing. D

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74 ' The Elements of Style By William Strunk Jr., E.B. White, and Roger Angell, Fourth Edition, Longman, 2000 J9

75 ' Writing for Computer Science By Justin Zobel, Springer, JD

76 ' Handbook of Writing for The Mathematical Sciences By Nicholas J. Higham, Siam,1993. J

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