ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 32 N 2602

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1 ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 32 N 2602 Date: REPLACES: ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 32 Data Management and Interchange Secretariat: United States of America (ANSI) Administered by Farance Inc. on behalf of ANSI DOCUMENT TYPE Disposition of Comments TITLE Disposition of comments on N2495 DIS Information technology - Business operational view Part 20: Linking business operational view to functional service view SOURCE PROJECT NUMBER STATUS REFERENCES ACTION ID. REQUESTED ACTION DUE DATE -- Number of Pages 6 LANGUAGE USED DISTRIBUTION WG1 - Ken Holman and Andrew Schoka - project editors Disposition of the comments in 32N2582 Summary of Voting on 32N2495 DIS ballot text. this DoC accompanies 32N2601 text for FDIS ballot by ITTF FYI English P & L Members SC Chair WG Conveners and Secretaries Dr. Timothy Schoechle, Secretary, ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 32 Farance Inc *, 3066 Sixth Street, Boulder, CO, United States of America Telephone: ; Timothy@Schoechle.org available from the JTC 1/SC 32 WebSite *Farance Inc. administers the ISO/IEC JTC 1/SC 32 Secretariat on behalf of ANSI

2 emplate for comments and observations Date: Document: ISO/IEC DIS ~11 ge This document seems like a technical report because there is no specification as standard. 2 ed ISO/IEC in a normative reference is not referenced in normative parts. 2 ed TS in a normative reference is not referenced in normative parts. 2 ed ISO/IEC in a normative reference is not referenced in normative parts. To change a standard to a technical report. To remove ISO/IEC from a normative reference. To remove TS from a normative reference. To remove ISO/IEC from a normative reference. page 1 of 5 - not accepted; further to "ISO/IEC Directives, Part 1, Consolidated ISO Supplement, 2014" section the subject of this document is no longer under development, nor is there a lack of agreement, as reflected in the ballot responses, to publish an IS - not accepted; a of definitions and figures are from ISO/IEC ed A sentence For the purposes of this To add a word following as For the

3 emplate for comments and observations Date: Document: ISO/IEC DIS document, the terms and definitions apply. is ambiguous purposes of this document, the following terms and definitions apply. A.4 Table A.1 ed There is no title of table as A.1 in Annex A. To add right titles following table s. - it is noted that the title of table A.1 is shown as "Columns in Table A.2" that is not in the appropriate position on the page A.4 Table A.1 ed There is a multi-page table as Table A.1. However, a first page of table has a title only. To add a title as Table A.1 (Continued) to a 2 nd page of table. page 2 of 5 - note that the rendering of the table title is referred to ISO/CS for publishing in the final document ; referred to ISO/CS for publishing of the final document A.4 Table A.2 ed There is no title of table as A.2 in Annex A. To add right titles following table s. - it is noted that the title of table A.2 is shown as "List of terms and definitions with cultural adaptability of: ISO English and ISO French language

4 emplate for comments and observations Date: Document: ISO/IEC DIS A.4 Table A.2 ed There is a multi-page table as Table A.2. However, a first page of table has a title only. To add a title as Table A.2 (Continued) to 2 nd and following pages of table. equivalency" that is not in the appropriate position on the page - note that the rendering of the table title is referred to ISO/CS for publishing in the final document ; referred to ISO/CS for publishing of the final document US Ed Incomplete sentence: "Base FSV standards exhibiting these properties support business transactions not only that are in compliance with Open-edi scenarios." US2 2 Ed Should :2009 ebusiness Vocabulary be included as a normative reference? It is the source of definition for 3.8 ebusiness. US3 3 1 st clause Ed The term "following" is missing from the standard boilerplate Change "not only" to "beyond those" Consider including Add "following" in front of "terms and definitions" US4 3.5 Definition Definition of "choreography" is there a source for - addressed through page 3 of 5

5 emplate for comments and observations Date: Document: ISO/IEC DIS this definition? US5 3.8 Abbreviation ed Definition of ebusiness not from 14662:2010 is from ebusiness business transaction, involving the making of commitments, in a defined collaboration space, among Persons using their IT systems, according to Open-edi standards NOTE 1 ebusiness can be conducted on both a for-profit and not-for-profit basis. NOTE 2 A key distinguishing aspect of ebusiness is that it involves the making of commitment(s) of any kind among the Persons in support of a mutually agreed upon goal, involving their IT systems, and doing so through the use of EDI (using a variety of communication networks including the Internet). NOTE 3 ebusiness includes various application areas such as e-commerce, e-administration, e- logistics, e-government, e-medicine, e-learning, etc. NOTE 4 The equivalent French language term for ebusiness is always presented in its plural page 4 of 5 a revised definition

6 emplate for comments and observations Date: Document: ISO/IEC DIS US6 4 Ed ICT Information Communications Technology missing form. add US nd clause Ed Last sentence wording Add "are" before "implemented" US nd clause Ed Wording Delete "helps" US9 6.5 Fig 4 Ed Figure is full of acronyms making it difficult for reader without ready knowledge of their meaning. US1 0 US1 1 US Fig 7 Ed Arrow labelled "Imposed structure constraints" could be more correct. Annex A Table A.2 Ed Entries 3.18, 3.24, 3,25,3.26, 3.31, 3.37, 3.38 seem unnecessary in this Annex since these definitions indicate their source as ISO/IEC 14662:2010 (D.1) Annex B 2 nd clause Ed The text does not elaborate on the elements within the support infrastructure Consider expanding acronyms; keep "Oe" as is for open edi. Alternatively, add a legend so graphic is standalone. Change to "Imposed structural syntax constraints" Remove those entries from Annex A and update each definition to reflect [ISO/IEC 14662:2010 (D.1)] since this is the more authorative source. For completeness, elaborate the clause to include the identification of the elements of user data, Choreographies, Transfer. - not accepted; this is the first Part where it is included as a Clause 3 definition page 5 of 5