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1 Editor's disposition s CD as at Srial Annx (.g. 3.1) Figur/ Tabl/t (.g. Tabl 1) 001 CA 00 All All - G Canada disapprovs th draft for th rasons blow. 002 GB 01 Gnral d numbring has bn usd as rqustd, but th actual lin numbrs ar diffrnt on both vrsions availabl to us. Th.pdf vrsion on th SC32 wbsit has th Forword hading as lin 116. Th.doc vrsion on th SC32 wbsit has th sam Forword hading as lin GB (pdf) Proposd chang by Canada will chang its vot to Approval if th s blow ar satisfactorily addrssd. Ensur lin numbrs ar consistnt across vrsions. furthr action at this tim furthr action at this tim d Splling. Amnd modling" to rad modlling. 004 US d "claus" is missing add "claus" btwn "in" and "5" 005 CA Ed Th rfrnc to claus 5 should b clarifid. Chang: " spcifid in 5" To: " spcifid in claus 5" Accptd s US US d "any xtnsions" is rdundant rmov "any xtnsions" 007 GB s (pdf) d Incorrct statmnt Amnd to rad b) shall not us, tst, accss, or prob for any xtnsion faturs nor xtnsions to th mtamodl spcifid in claus GB 04 4 t Missing dfinitions Add dfinitions associativ ntity typ, aggrgation and composition as appndd blow. Accptd s US02 Accptd dfinitions addd pag 1 8

2 Srial 009 CA , 238 Annx (.g. 3.1) Figur/ Tabl/t (.g. Tabl 1) 4.1 All Ed Rfrncing dfinitions from othr standards without actually including thm rquirs th radr to obtain and accss thos othr standards. This documnt would b mor usabl if th rquird trms and dfinitions wr rpatd hr, with rfrncs to indicat from whnc thy com. In addition, by rfrncing all dfinitions from , w nd up with two dfinitions for som trms (.g. attribut, cardinality) 010 CA Dfinition Ed 'collction' is a dfind trm (4.2.5), so should b shown in bold, with a xrf to th trm Proposd chang by For all trms usd in this standard, includ th trms and dfinitions in claus 4, with a rfrnc to th sourc. Mak th corrction. Accptd s 4.1 and 4.2 significantly amndd 011 US d rfrnc to " " rmov "1" 012 US d rfrnc to " :2003" chang to " :2013" 013 US d rfrnc to " " rmov "1" 014 US d xtranous articl rmov first "th" 015 US d txt rads "[d 3 - dat to follow] " rplac " [d 3 - dat to follow]" with "2013" 016 CA MDR Ed Th dat Edition 3 is 2013 Apply th updat. Accptd s US GB Figur 1 d Diagram is too small to rad. Rplac with th diagram appndd blow. 018 US d Figur 1's txt too small Us th whol pag to display th figur or brak it ovr two pags. 019 GB Figur 2 t Add a not to xplain that Domain and its subclasss ar rusabl. Add NOTE Each Domain (and its subclasss) must b spcifid for on or mor Information_Modls. Each instanc th othr mtaclasss that ar subclasss Modl_Elmnt must b dfind in on and only on Information_Modl. Accptd appndd diagram incorporatd Accptd s GB05 pag 2 8

3 Srial Annx (.g. 3.1) Figur/ Tabl/t (.g. Tabl 1) 020 JP Figur 2 d In this figur and lgnd, th dashd lins with a triangular arrowd mans ralization. (S. OMG UML Suprstructur Vr, 2.4.1) 021 JP Figur 2 t About subclass "Modl_Elmnt" (from MFI Cor and mapping) othr than Diagram. 022 CA and following 023 CA maximum_ cardinality 024 CA Validation_ rul dscription Ths classs will hav "containd_by" rfnc inhritd from "Modl_Elmnt" Class. In this situation, Th instanc ths classs has not forbiddn having rlation with th instanc th subclass th "Modl class" dfind by othr parts (such as MFI-5, 7, 8, 13). Para 1 Ed Th introductory paragraph and th suprclass ar unncssarily containd within an MS Word tabl which mans th lins do not gt numbrd. This applis to all th following 5.3.x clauss as wll. Ed Ed In lin 3 th dscription, th word 'mthods' is usd, but this is not a dfind trm. W assum this is intndd to rfr to Information Modlling mthods. Th last sntnc th dscription is missing a priod. Proposd chang by If ths arrows man spcialisation association btwn suprclasss, us th triangular arrow th solid lin with which width diffrs from Gnralizations btwn classs. If ths classs hav no rlation with a subclass "Modl" class, rmov th gnraliz rlation with "Modl_Elmnt" class. And it is ncssary to loosn constraint claus 15.5 "Modlling guidlin". Rmov th introductory paragraphs and suprclass from th tabls. Only us a tabl whr it adds valu. Whrvr 'mthod' is usd in this way, qualify it as an 'information modlling mthod', and dfin this trm in claus 4.2. Add th priod. Accptd figur amndd in lin with discussions at Santa F mting Accptd figur amndd in lin with discussions at Santa F mting t accptd; this is th standard layout usd in this was ndorsd at th Santa F mting throughout pag 3 8

4 Srial Annx (.g. 3.1) Figur/ Tabl/t (.g. Tabl 1) 025 CA Entity_ T Evrything in th modl dscribs a typ somthing. Why is th word 'typ' addd to Entity, but not to othrs, such as Rlationship and Attribut. [Th fact that som E-R mthods do th sam is not a good rason for us to do it hr.] 026 US d Only occurrnc "IRI" with no xpansion or dfinition Proposd chang by Rnam Entity_ to Entity, but add som gnric txt at th bginning 5.3 to xplain that th modl dscribs typs, but w don't want to includ th typ in vry nam. Altrnativly, includ '' in othr nams, spcially if th claim that all classs in th modl dscribs typs is not accptd. includ a dfinition in claus 3 or in txt; at minimum xpand th acronym in th txt 027 GB 07 Annx A Figur A.1 d Diagram is too small to rad. Rplac with th diagram appndd blow. 028 US Annx A Fig A.1 d Figur A.1's txt too small Us th whol pag to display th figur or brak it ovr two pags. Aftr discussion at th Santa F mting it was agrd to kp as is but to add xplanatory nots to th dfinitions. This has bn don. Accptd xpansion addd to claus 4.3 Accptd appndd diagram incorporatd Accptd s GB US Annx A d Vrb missing: "may b with instancs" insrt "dfind" btwn "b" and "with" t accptd; making th proposd chang will altr th maning dcision ndorsd at Santa F mting 030 US Annx A d Vrb missing: "may b with instancs" insrt "dfind" btwn "b" and "with" t accptd; making th proposd chang will altr th maning dcision ndorsd at Santa F mting 031 US Annx C Tabl C.1 t Column=IDEF1X Row = Domains ar Namd In IDEF1X, Domains ar namd as a datatyp, so it should say "As a Datatyp" lik th othr columns instad "Ys". rfrnc: Wikipdia Exampl IDEF1x Th sam for th row for Ellis-Barkr notation. 032 GB 08 Annx D Figur D.9 t Incorrct SQL syntax. Rplac with th SQL appndd blow and amnd Figur D.10 accordingly. 033 US Bibliograph y g dirct citation for IEEE IDEF1X Standard. Add citation for IEEE IDEF1X Standard to Bibliography. Accptd for IDEF1X, not accptd for Ellis-Barkr dcision ndorsd at Santa F mting chang mad Accptd changs mad Accptd citation addd pag 4 8

5 Srial Annx (.g. 3.1) Figur/ Tabl/t (.g. Tabl 1) 034 CA 09 G If any furthr problms ar discovrd bfor or during th Commnt Rsolution Mting, and a consnsus can b rachd on a solution, thn thy should b corrctd. Proposd chang by To b dtrmind at th CRM as rquird. furthr action at this tim pag 5 8

6 Additional dfinitions for 4.2: 4.2.n associativ ntity typ information modl lmnt that has both rlationship and ntity typ proprtis. NOTE 1 May also b known as an association class NOTE 2 An associativ ntity typ can b sn as a rlationship that also has ntity typ proprtis, or as an ntity typ that also has rlationship proprtis. NOTE 3 Adaptd from ISO/IEC 19501:2005, 0000_ n aggrgation spcial form rlationship that spcifis a whol-part rlationship btwn th aggrgat (whol) and a componnt part NOTE Adaptd from ISO/TS 19103:2005, n composition form aggrgation which rquirs that a part instanc b includd in at most on composit at a tim, and that th composit objct is rsponsibl for th cration and dstruction th parts. Composition may b rcursiv. [ISO/IEC 19501:2005, 0000_209] pag 6 8

7 Rplacmnt diagram for Figurs 1 and A.1: Information_Modlling_Languag nam [] dscribing_ languag xprssd_ modl Information_Modl nam [] contxt [0..1] modl diagram_ modl_lmnt Diagram nam [] nam [] dscription [0..1] Entity_ diagram _ modl_lmnt subtyp_ gnral_ constraint_ partial_dscription Gnral_Constraint spcification [] uniqu_ idntifir idntifir_ partial_dscription Uniqu_Idntifir primary_indicator [0..1] idntifir_ lmnt_ partial_ dscription Uniqu_Idntifir_ Elmnt charactristic_ partial_dscription Attribut nam [] minimum_cardinality [0..1] maximum_cardinality [0..1] dscription [0..1] n_ Ky_Attribut Ky_Attribut constraind_ attribut 0..1 catgory_ discriminator 0..1 constraint Domain nam [] dscription [0..1] discriminatd_ hirarchy 0..1 classification_ schm_ partial_dscription hirarchy Entity_Spcialisation_ Hirarchy compltnss_indicator [] xclusivity_indicator [] dscription [0..1] rprsntd_ hirarchy subjct_ attribut objct Attribut_Uniqu_Idntifir_ Elmnt Nativ_Ky_Attribut Forign_Ky_Attribut rank [] Rlationship_End_Uniqu_ Idntifir_Elmnt Dscribd_Domain validation_rul [0..1] Enumratd_Domain domain 2..* constraind_ valu Valid_Valu litral [] Rlationship_End_Forign_Ky_Attribut partial_rprsntation Entity_Spcialisation_Hirarchy_Forign_Ky_Attribut objct partial_ rprsntation rlationship_nd_ group_partial_ dscription subjct_ rlationship_nd Rlationship_End rprsntd_ rlationship_nd minimum_cardinality [] mutually_xclusiv_ maximum_cardinality [] Rlationship componnt link_phras [0..1] 2..* rlationship Rlationship_End_Group ntity_rol [0..1] nam [0..1] group collction_typ [0..1] containd_ idntifying_indicator [0..1] aggrgation_indicator [0..1] rlationship_nd composition_indicator [0..1] associativ_indicator [0..1] rlationship_ modl_lmnt diagram pag 7 8

8 Rplacmnt SQL for Figur D.9: CREATE TABLE organisation ( organisation_nam VARCHAR(20) NOT NULL, organisation_addrss VARCHAR(250) NOT NULL, PRIMARY KEY (organisation_nam) ); CREATE TABLE vhicl_modl ( organisation_nam VARCHAR(20) NOT NULL, modl_nam VARCHAR(40) NOT NULL, spcification VARCHAR(250) NOT NULL, PRIMARY KEY (organisation_nam, modl_nam), FOREIGN KEY (organisation_nam) REFERENCES organisation ); CREATE TABLE vhicl ( organisation_nam VARCHAR(20) NOT NULL, modl_nam VARCHAR(40) NOT NULL, chassis_numbr VARCHAR(30) NOT NULL, first_rgistration_dat DATE, PRIMARY KEY (organisation_nam, chassis_numbr), FOREIGN KEY (organisation_nam, modl_nam) REFERENCES vhicl_modl ); pag 1 8